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I like Zero's eyes better in this picture, over my last Zero is Red..which is lying around here someplace..

Anyways.

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Comments and/or criticism always appreciated..wahahaha.

[Edited on 5-6-2004 by HollowTorment]

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WOw Hollow...you are always inprovingother than the fact the hand looks a little strange...this is almost perfect ;D


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I never knew you were THAT good after seeing Bowser Bunny.:lol:
Just kidding!
That other picture was good too.


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Is it the lines over the knuckles? I was iffy about leaving them there, but..I decided to anyway, hehe. =) Thank you for pointing that out though. =)

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actually yeah I think that's it, because it makes his fingers look like they are not attached to his hand in a way


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Yeah, other than that fist, i love it! *steals it and runs away*


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Thank you, deltafist..I posted right as you posted, and didn't see your post. o.o But..Bowser Bunny scare you? :lol:

And thank you MMZ66, and ShadowGS.. I might edit his hand if I can think of what to do with it. =)

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Well I think the lines on the knuckles give a nice robotic effect, after all, Zero is a robot.


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A robot?! O.O I'm kidding, kidding. But thank you. =)

The line occured because of Sensei's work..he draws lines to indicate where the knuckles are, usually. But I guess he doesn't draw them when the hand is in the position that I drew it in. o.o

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i like it its very...evil and good

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i dont think its the line, i think its the fingers all together. when i first looked at it, it looked like the fingers where facing the oposite direction. if you made the pinki and the ring finger alittle longer that would look alot better. other then the hand, it looks great


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The helmet could use abit of work(it just looks abit off on the lower parts), and the hand problems everyone's noted bothers me as well. The coloring and lineart in general is quite nice though.


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I'm a bit late, was supposed to post here earler.

I'ts a great picture, I won't mention the detailes allready mentioned, ut I' would like to add something. The only thing (apart from the allready mentioned) that bothers me, is the general roundness...

For example, the helmet is supposed to be much more symetric and "square". The fact that it al looks so dynamic takes the "robot" fealing away slightly.

But of course, this is only if I get picky about it. I'ts a great peace of work, that "bulged metal" shading was a great idea :)


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Once again people prove that they are better artist than me! :lol: Oh well, I don't draw very often anyways. But when I do and I want to, as in out of nowhere, not out of boredom, I can normally draw pretty well.


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Your work is excellent Holly. I don't think there's anything negative I can say about it and the way you've manipulated the tone for Zero's armour is great.


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Hmmm..maybe I should've shaded the fingers differently.. I thought the entire arm in the foreground looked too small, anyway, though. Since Megaman hands are supposed to be HUGE. :lol:

And the squareness..that's a good point actually, yes it is. I believe I just need to study Megaman X armor designs in general more.. Going by my memory..is a very bad idea. :lol:

But again, thank you all! =)

..I should try drawing Zero with a pencil, maybe he'd look better.

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He looks awesome almost perfect except for the knuckles wich was pointed out earlier...

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Better than anything I could do right now...
Like everyone said before me, the knuckles do look a bit weird.

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Thank you sergeent, and Lugia.

I edited the knuckles here.. I think they're okay, but what does everyone else think? And now that they're changed and you can see past that flaw..is there anything else? o.o EDit: Yeah, I know there was stuff already mentioned..like the helmet and the deal of being too round..but I think I fixed that in my next Zero picture I did, heh.

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[Edited on 5-6-2004 by HollowTorment]

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i think it looks better!