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Battle Network X: The Next Generation

Ohayo, kuns, chans, samas, sans, hakases and senseis!
This is another shot of mine at trying to create a good Fanfic. Whilst ZBD was based more on humour and it’s episodes were short, I’m now trying to create a more ‘serious’ Fanfic, it’s episodes being longer, too. This will not be based on MMZ and the lot, but on the games, not the anime, of Battle Network. This Fanfic will also contain Japanese terms, which I will take from wherever I can find them. It is based on the games, but it might contain things from the anime. If you don’t know who’s who in Japanese, go either here or here. I hope you’ll enjoy the story.
Oh, and this is the only site were this fic should be showed. If you find it elsewhere, PM me, I'll take care of that bastard.


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Battle Network X: The Next Generation – Episode One: Where it always starts…




“Metto-kun…”

“Ungh…”

“Metto-kun, wakey wakey…”

“Just… five more minutes…”

“Okay… but you’ll be late…”

“Late?” He opened his eyes a little.

“Yes… you know… school?” The other voice said.

“School? I overslept again, right?” The boy got out of bed and started putting on his clothes, a yellow shirt, blue jeans and white sneakers.

“Yep.” The other voice said.

“Woop dee doo…” The boy said. He looked at the screen of his computer. He saw the face of a teenage boy with bright emerald eyes. “Can you give me the excuse of the day, Demi?”

“Yes, Metto-kun.” Demi said. That is Demi.EXE, my Navi. He’s very smart, and I think he’s also great at netbattling, because my computer doesn’t have a Fire Wall, I don’t know, I haven’t netbattled that much. He’s also my best friend, if you’d call data in such a human-looking form a friend.

“Okay… Friday… September 30th… Hmm… You blew up the house again, Metto-kun!”

“Right… like Mark-sensei’d ever believe that… what are the others?”

“Either you found a half-dead cat and brought it to the vet, or your grandma died and you don’t have to go to school at all.”

“Well, since eight of my grandmothers have already died, that wouldn’t be very plausible. Half-dead cat it is.” He took his PET from the charger, which was connected to his laptop, and went downstairs. He took some of the sandwiches, which were on a plate on the kitchen table, which he ate quickly, then took his obentou and left the house.

He walked the route he usually did when he overslept again. Left, right, left again, go straight, right, left… Until he stopped in front of a shop. He looked at it.

“One day…” He whispered, “One day we will have chips even he doesn’t have.”

“Yeah…” Demi, “keep on dreaming, eh?”

“Hmm… yeah…” The boy mumbled.

“Let’s go to school, shall we?” Demi said.

“Okay then…” Metto said. He didn’t like school. He disliked it very much. In fact, he HATED it. The only reason why he still went to school each morning was…

“Hiya, Metto-kun!” A girly voice said. Metto turned around, and looked at the girl in front of him.

“Hi Sara.” Well, she was one of the reasons. She had dark red-blonde hair and bright bluish green eyes. That’s Sara. Smart girl, a little shy, very funny, and quite clumsy at times, and one of my friends. Usually she isn’t late, but since this year’s start a few weeks ago that changed. I don’t know why, but at least there is someone who shares my fate of coming late for school a lot.

“Late again, huh?” Sara said. It wasn’t a question. “Overslept again?”

“Yeah.” Metto replied. “Just like you, I presume?”

The girl’s face turned from a light tanned peach to a slightly more red. She didn’t oversleep much, she usually made it to class in time, save a few exceptions, but she liked being with friends, like Metto. She quickly thought of a way her red face wouldn’t be noticed by Metto.

“Last one to make it to class’s a rotten egg!” Sara yelled, running off.

“Hey! That’s not fair!” Metto took off after her.


… … … … …


*tick tock, tick tock, tick tock*

Mark Sinelli, Math teacher, had class 7C for this hour. The entire class was working hard on the exercises he had written on the blackboard. And the one thing that made this class different from all others was… Did you hear that? No? I did. Silence. The entire class was silent. A slight smile was on his face. Mark Sinelli had experience with teaching. But the fact that he had been a sergeant in the Sharo army might also help keeping the class silent like this. The kids didn’t hate him. He was a nice teacher. But you had to stick to his rules, or you could end up like…

CRASH! The door swung open. Two kids, a boy and a girl came in. Mark looked at them with the analyzing eyes of general. Male, 168 cm, greyish green eyes, dark red hair, and he was late. That could be no-one but Ryuudo Metto. Female, 163 cm, bluish green eyes, dark red-blonde hair, and a red face of shame. That was Nayo Sara. Both 13 year old 7th graders at Akihara Middle School.

“Sit down, you two.” He said, pointing to their places.

That’s Mark Sinelli for you. Charming in some way, analyzing, calm. Shame he left the Sharo army, we wouldn’t be stuck with him if he hadn’t. Metto thought, as he sat down.

They sat down. They knew what would be coming. What WOULD be coming, usually. Because this time, things were different. Not that Metto’s coming-late for school had gone up to 100 or so, no, it was different.

“Class,” Mark-sensei said. “Since now all of you are present,” He looked at Metto and Sara, Sara turning even more red and Metto taking a breath, waiting for what was coming.

“I have an announcement to make. You probably all know of Venidici.”

The entire class was silent. Metto held his breath. Venidici? How couldn’t they have heard of it? It was a group of Netbattlers every kid looked up to. Most members were in their twenties, including the two who were the most admired and skilled of all, Hikari Netto and Ijuuin Enzan. And the organization organized the N-1 since two years.

“Well, class, they decided to start the N-1 once more, this time for the entire planet.”

The entire planet? Not just Japan? Then there’ll be very tough Netbattlers around there.

“And they have declared that some of the participants will be allowed to become members of Venidici.”

The class held their breaths for a while, then an eruption of sound occurred, they were all talking about it.

“People will be allowed to enter Venidici?” Sara whispered. “The last time someone was allowed to become member was more than a year ago! And that was just one person who hadn’t even lost one battle after 200 successive Netbattles!”

“I know!” Metto said. “But we will enter the N-1, won’t we Demi?”

“Absolutely! I couldn’t agree more with you, Metto-kun!”

“I wish I could enter too.” Sara sighed. She didn’t have a Navi at the time being.

“Don’t worry, Sara, you’ll get a Navi in time. And there’ll be plenty of time to practise Netbattling.”

“Yeah!” Demi replied. “Me and Metto haven’t Netbattled that much. For as far as I can remember just 11 times. But we will participate nonetheless!”

“Yeah! I’ll get a Navi for myself and enter the N-1, and I’m going to beat them all to pieces!” Sara said fiercely.

“Oh no you won’t!” Metto replied. “‘Cause Demi and I won’t lose to you!”

“We’ll see about that, Metto! I’ll see you in the finals!”

Metto didn’t say anything in return. He just smiled at the eager-for-netbattle-face of Sara’s.

Oh yeah, I haven’t introduced the most important person here yet. Hi, I’m Ryuudo Metto. Future N-1 Champion!



Okay, since I decided to put as much Japanese into the story as I like, I didn’t use ‘Electopia’ from the games, but ‘Japan’, what I actually don’t prefer, but it’s better than the other option. Also an [i]obentou
is a lunchbox.

Oh, and Japan uses the metric system and the lot. Wasn't there at first, since I'm getting quite used to feet and yards, but that's now over.
30 cm = 1 foot
2,5 cm = 1 inch
1 meter = about 1 yard and a few inches?

Whenever scenes change between worlds –between the real and Net worlds, that is– I will put ‘--- --- --- --- ---’ there. Whenever a scene-change within worlds occurs, this: ‘… … … … …’ will be shown.

Now… anyone who can figure out out of what I made up ‘Venidici’ gets 10 points! :P
And ‘Metto’ looks obviously a lot like ‘Netto’, which most of you know as Lan. Did that partly on purpose. But in this story there’ll be a lot more of ‘Metto’-like things.
And anyone who can figure out out of what I came up with ‘Metto’ for the other 50% gets another 10 points! :P
As for Metto’s last name, 10 points for that as well!
:lol:



[Edited on 1-10-2005 by Morphman]

[Edited on 7-10-2005 by Morphman]


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I gotta say, I'm pretty impressed. I didn't actually read your first one (sorry!), but this one is very well written. The style is nice, the characters are interesting, and best of all the whole idea of "we kids are going to be in the world-saving net-battling organization" is right up BN's alley. :lol:
The Japenese did distract me a bit, but it was fun to read. Or IS fun, presuming you continue it.


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Thanks for the replies! Yes Heatman, I'm going on with this. I'm already halfway Episode 5, but I'll post an Episode about each 5 days, so I'll have enough time to write on the stuff.


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nice one and especially Nayo Sara. when you switch the S and the N you get SayoNara, simple but still good

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Morph all I have to say is great job!!! im already hooked! great job!(and you said I might not like it! sheesh!)


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Thanks for the replies so far! And ForteXX, heh, thanks bud. ;)


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Battle Network X: The Next Generation – Episode 2: The Training starts


School was over. The doors burst open, kids ran home.

“Okay Demi,” Metto said. “Now we’ll have to find a place to train and sign up for the N-1.”

“Well, we can train in the local dome, they’ve finished building it a month ago. And I think there are plenty of places were we can sign up for the N-1.”

“Metto!” Metto spun around and saw Sara coming towards them. “Can I come with you? You’re going to train for the N-1 right? I’d like to see that.”

“Well…” Metto scratched the back of his head, thinking. “I guess it’s okay…”

“Great!” Sara beamed. “I hope I can learn from you when I get a Navi!”

They walked towards the dome on Demi’s instructions. Since he had a GPS system, he knew where to go. When they were in front of it, they saw it was actually a normal building, but on the inside, they saw it had a lot of Netbattle machines and there were a lot of people inside.

“Let’s find a place to train Demi.” Metto said.

“Train, you said?” Someone asked. A young woman was standing next to them. She had shoulder long raven-black hair and golden brown eyes and she was quite tall.

“Uhm… yes ma’am.” Metto said.

“Then you came to the right place, kids. You’re new to Netbattling, right? Then I’ll teach you some basics.” She said when Metto and Sara nodded. This will be SO easy! She thought.

She took them one floor higher and stopped at one of bigger battle modules.

“Okay then. Plug-In! Quiver.EXE! Transmission!”

“Plug-In! Demi.EXE! Transmission!”

The two Navis observed eachother. One was a girl, short and slim, and had a bow attached to her arm. She had a short green skirt and top. Her skin was slightly greenish white with brown striped patterns, like if it were tattoos. She had long raven-black hair and golden brown eyes like her Operator. Her icon above her right breast was a green background with three red-brown arrows. It looked as if she were an elf, just walked out of a Lord of the Rings movie. Her eyes were sparkling and she smiled, eager to beat the crap out of her opponent.
The other was Demi, a boy, tall, emerald eyes and short black hair that shone like gold from what came out under his helmet. His helmet looked quite basic, it had some ivory white dots on it, and he had two objects on the side of his helmet, which looked a bit like spiky fins, they curved to the back of his head and joined eachother in a downward V-shape. His suit was a dark marine blue, with dark blood red stripes. He had a chest plate which was black with yellow ‘shoulder plates’ and he had his symbol on it, a sideways 8, which was white, surrounded by dark blue. His gloves and boots were also black with yellow, and his right underarm had turned into a yellow sword. From his shoulders, his gloves and his boots long, curved spikes sprouted, going from midnight black at the root to ivory white at the tip. He, too, smiled at his opponent. “Look who’s handsome.” He muttered.

“Did you say something, Demi?” Metto asked.

“Erm… no, Metto-kun! Not at all!” Demi said. Did he actually hear that?

“Okay, I guess you know the basics of Netbattling already?” The woman asked.

“We got an A+ for Virus Busting in class, and yes, we know the basics.” Metto replied.

“Metto-kun,” Demi said cautiously, “don’t get overconfident now.”

“Aw, come on, Demi! This is just a practise battle! Right?”

“Yes, it may be a practise battle,” the woman replied, “but that won’t stop me from holding back because you’re rookies.”

“Rookies, eh?” Metto said. “Let’s get this started.”

The words BATTLE START flashed over the Navis’ heads. Demi runned towards Quiver, his sword readied for the slash. Quiver jumped up, over the blade that would else have slashed her in two, flew up, and shot at Demi with her bow.

“She can fly?” Demi said.

“Hey! That’s unfair!” Metto yelled.

“Always be prepared for all that is possible in a Netbattle.” The woman replied.

Metto grumbled. “Then take this! Airshoes, Battle Chip, Slot-In!” Demi’s boots slightly changed in appeared, making him able to take off into the air.

Demi flew up towards Quiver, who shot a few arrows at him, which he repelled with his sword.

“Area Steal, Battle Chip, Slot-In!” The woman yelled. Quiver disappeared right in front of Demi.

“Meteor Body, Battle Chip, Slot in!” The woman yelled again.

Demi turned around, and saw Quiver, surrounded by fire, flying towards him at astonishing speed.

“What the… ?” Demi was able to say. Right after that, Quiver crashed into him and they flew into the ground together. Large piles of dust covered Metto’s view of the battle.

“Demi!” He cried.

As the dust went away, they saw a very deep crater in the area. It went so deep they could not see anything of Demi or Quiver anymore.

“Succes…” The woman whispered.

“Success?” Metto asked, astonished by her attitude. “Success? How can you call an unbelievably deep hole and probably the deletion of both our Navis a success?”

“Simple,” The woman said, grinning, “Quiver can’t be deleted by her own attacks. And even if she could receive damage from them, she still would have enough Hit Points left to survive another attack of this scale. Nothing is impossible in a Netbattle you know.”

Metto looked at her, not able to believe what she just had said. He looked at the hologram again, at the hole Demi and Quiver were in. Is this how it ends? Do I lose Demi even before our training has really started?

They saw a figure coming out of the hole. As it came closer, they noticed it had long black hair, and two golden eyes lit up in the dark. After a while, it stood onto the ground of the Netbattle Area.

“Well done, Quiver!” The woman said. “You won! Log-out.” But when she pulled the plug of the PET out of the port, Quiver was still there.

“Quiver! What’s wrong?”

Quiver started shaking. “I… I’m… I’m so… sorry… Tara-san…”

SLASH! A sword came out of Quiver’s insides, making a big hole in her torso. Out of it jumped a shadow, a figure, covered in dirt and blood. Quiver’s remains faded away. “Mission accomplished.” The figure said.



When I say ‘chestplate’, like I did with Demi’s description, I mean like Protoman has, not a real ‘chestplate’, but something that looks like it, and has defensive purposes.
I don’t think anybody has ever thought of something like ‘Meteor Body’, and it seemed a great idea for a chip, so I put it in here.

If people want to, and I find it worthy enough, I will use their chip and Navi creations from this Navi Creation topic, this Chip creation topic, and this Powerful Navi Creation topic.
Also, when Demi says “Look who’s handsome.” he refers to Quiver.


Yeh likey it? There'll be more!

[Edited on 3-10-2005 by Morphman]

[Edited on 3-10-2005 by Morphman]


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if you like you can use my chips from the create your chip topic. but if you think they aren't good (or evil) enough then it's okay

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OOH! Nice! I wanna hav sumthin' o' me own creationz in here too! :D


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Okay, I'll see... and ForteXX, how's your fic comin' along? I'd like to see what's done yet soon.


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Morph you could use my navi Gate.EXE.and the fic almost done. I want to complete 3 epesodes before I post anything


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Morph you could use my navi Gate.EXE.and the fic almost done. I want to complete 3 epesodes before I post anything


Okay! I might change some things on the chips and Navis, and 3 episodes? You're really getting the hang of it! ;)


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Good job Moph with the storyline but, I think they talk to much more action.:)


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Good job Moph with the storyline but, I think they talk to much more action.:)


Soon, my friend, soon...
And to describe a whole battle is sort of... dull... then it's better to put a conversation there.

Also I've thought of a sorta MM Card Game of my own, which I will use in this fic.

Seeyall!
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OOO kay....
See your work then!
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Battle Network X: The Next Generation – Episode 3: The Impossible is always Possible…


“NO!” The woman cried. “He hid inside Quiver herself? That’s impossible!”

“Nothing is impossible in a Netbattle you know.” Metto said. “You lose. I win. Have a nice day.” He reached for the PET’s plug.

The woman was pissed. “You won’t get away with it that easy!” She quickly plugged her PET back into the module and pushed a button on it. Suddenly, there appeared a lot of Navis around Demi. There were a few dozen Heal Navis.

“What? How in the… Do you think we can take these guys on, Demi?” Metto asked his Navi.
Demi was breathing heavily already.

“Heh… these guys? Piece of cake…”

“What do you suppose we do?”

“You just stand back, Metto. I’m going to use a Navi’s strongest weapon.” The Heal Navis stood around him in a circle. They looked tough. Could Demi defeat them all with this weapon of his? Demi stroke a battle pose.

“MASS DATA OVERLOAD!!!” He yelled. His body burst out in a flash of light. It looked like Demi had turned into a star or something. Then, a huge explosion occurred. All Heal Navis couldn’t take the damage and were deleted instantly. Demi laid heavily damaged on the floor.

“Demi! DEMI! Are you alright?” Metto yelled. He didn’t notice the woman sneaking away.

“Hold it right there, b*tch!” The woman froze. An angry young girl, better known as Nayo Sara, was standing right behind her, with an official by her side. Sara still held her cell phone in her hand. “That’s her, sir!” Sara said, pointing towards the woman.

“You’re under arrest.” The man said, putting handcuffs on her.

“Because?” The woman asked furiously.

“Because of working with an anti-Net organization.” The official took her away.

Sara sighed. That went well… “DEMI! Speak to me buddy! DEMI!” Oh, guess not…

“What’s wrong?” She asked Metto.

“It’s Demi! He hasn’t answered me yet and he doesn’t look very good!”

Sara looked at the hologram of the Netbattle Module. Demi stood there in the middle of the destruction. He was kneeling, his head bent. “Me—Metto—kun…”

“Demi?”

Demi looked up. He looked awful. Half of his helmet and chest plate were blown away, and he had a look on his face like he had just eaten a two-year-old burger. He had gaping wounds and burns over his whole body.

“Demi, are you alright?”

“I… I’m alright… Metto-kun…”

“Good.” Metto let out a sigh of relief. “Log Out, Demi” Metto pulled the PET’s plug out of the port. But Demi didn’t log out.

“What’s wrong Demi?” Metto asked concerned.

“I… can’t log out, Metto-kun. If I do, I will be deleted. I took too much damage.”

“Can you repair yourself?”

“I think so… but I don’t think I can repair fully. I will need data from another Navi to recover fully.”

“Can’t you use those Heal Navis’ data?”

Demi didn’t even have to look around him to answer that. “No, they are totally destroyed.”

“Shall I see if I can find someone here who’s willing to help?”

“No, if their Navi would log in, they send out a tiny electronic pulse. Usually, that doesn’t affect a Navi, but seeing how badly damaged I am, I feel lucky that I can still speak and move.”

Metto fel silent. There was only one way he could help Demi out right now, and even that option would delete him before they would have the chance to repair him.

“Hey, who’s that?” Sara pointed at the hologram, at a place behind Demi, near the giant crater.

“There’s a Navi overthere! Maybe he can help us to repair Demi!”

Demi turned around and looked at the place Sara had pointed to. There was indeed a Navi’s body lying overthere. He slowly walked over to the Navi. It was a girl, and she was unconscious. She was probably a little shorter than Demi, she wore a short silvery ivory white dress, the same color of boots or shoes, and a skin-tight black suit underneath it. She had shoulder long silvery blonde and raven-black hair. The icon on her chest was a yellowish white sickle on the right of the person who’d look at it, and it had a dark blue background.

“It doesn’t seem that she’s part of those Heal Navis’ group.” Demi said. “They probably took her with them when they came here.”

“Is she alright?” Sara asked.

“She’s alright, for as far as I can see. I’ll copy her data to repair myself, Metto-kun.”

“Okay.” Metto replied.

Demi put his right hand on the Navi’s icon and started copying her data. After a minute or so, there was a kaching and Demi had copied the data totally and his repair program then activated.

“Metto-kun, is it okay with you if I transfer her to your PET? It’s best not to leave her here, and we might get to know who she is.” Demi said.

“Okay. Start the transfer.”

Demi put his hand on her icon again. The Navi started to slowly fade away. After she disappeared from the hologram, Metto looked at his PET, seeing the Navi lying on the ground in it’s cyberspace.

“Well done, Demi. You come back, too. Let’s go home.”

Un.” Demi replied. “Right.” He logged out, and Metto and Sara then left the building.


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Back in the Netbattle module, a hole to the Net opened. A tall, cloaked Navi stepped out.

“Hmm… these rookies have potential… 60 Heal Navis in one blow… Impressive… This will be… interesting…

“Ungh…” Behind the cloaked figure, something stirred in the darkness.

“Aah… seems you’re not deleted after all, aren’t you, Quiver?”

Quiver stepped forward. “No. I have special programs of myself outside of my body that keep me from deletion. But it still hurts.” She felt her at her scar, which ran from her left shoulder to her right hip.

“At least you live to see another day, Quiver.” The Cloaked Navi replied.

“Yes. And if you wouldn’t mind, Forte, I’d like to go now. I’m now Operator-less.”

“Oh, and that’s a problem, because?” Forte asked, already knowing the answer.

Quiver look at him angrily. “Because I can’t use Battle Chips without her and it has a few more disadvantages!”

“Ooh… someone’s in a grumpy mood today.” Forte said sarcastically.

“Shut up, Forte. I don’t want to kill you, yet.”

“Hmm, yes, right. Oh, and Quiver?”

Quiver, who was about to step through the hole, turned around to face Forte.

“Your Navi Bank account has been deleted a few moments ago, along with all the programs within it. Including your Anti-Deletion Program.”

Quiver looked at him for a moment, her eyes wide. “What?” She hissed.

Forte gave her a smile. “Yes. Don’t tell me you forgot the Officials do that to each and every Navi that breaks the laws?”

Quiver face hardened. “I didn’t. See you, Forte-sama. Untill I’ll kill you again.” She ran off through the hole.

Forte still had a smile on his face. “Love you too Quiver. Love you too.”



Un means ‘right’ or ‘yes’, as a very short answer, and isn’t used too much in Japan. I know you probably never heard of Navi Banks, but for the story I just made them up as places where Navis can store special data.
I’ve never seen in the series that a Navi was so badly damaged that he or she couldn’t return to his or her PET, so you can imagine in what bad shape Demi was.
Also, this ‘MASS DATA OVERLOAD’ is just something I came up with. In the ending of BN3, Megaman/Rockman overloads all his programs to get Lan/Netto back into his body. So he used it sort of as an attack, like Demi’s here. And it is indeed a Navi’s strongest weapon, according to my opinion (well, there are stronger Battle Chips, yes, but this is a weapon that all Navis can use).
About Quiver and Forte at the end, Quiver didn’t mean she had killed him a lot of times before, but she probably would love too. And Forte didn’t mean that he actually loves Quiver, or did he? ^_^
You’ll find out next time!


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Now i want to ask you something are you gonna use navis that were made up on the messege boards. It would be cool to see some made up navis from the boards hope ya do. *cough* Sharpshooter*cough* excuse me.


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oooo.......This is getting good. But with all honesty Morph......THIS IS THE BEST!!!! So how about using Gate.EXE huh?


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I'll pick some good ones. Gate will DEFINATELY be in it, though maybe altered a little, if you give me permission, that is.
I haven't seen Sharpshooter yet, but I'll look for him. If you're going to make Navis specially for the fic (not that that will be done) also say if it's evil or not, and tell a little about the personality and background story.
That way, it'll make this diamond, this flower of a fic (must... resist... urge... to call my own fic awesome...), blossom...


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Fair enough ok I'll edit Sharpshooter a little to help with the story and he's under create your own navis btw. I'll do my best for Morph.


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Thanks Blazen! Oh, and I'll make an icon for it, if you don't and don't mind. I can only discribe it here, but if possible, I'll post the icon images sometime.


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say, eh...., morph. is there still a small part left for me?

i would love to be in it. i don't care if it's a good guy or a bad guy, a human or a navi.

you can make up a rando name which looks like mine and make up a personality.

could you make a part for me please?


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say, eh...., morph. is there still a small part left for me?

i would love to be in it. i don't care if it's a good guy or a bad guy, a human or a navi.

you can make up a rando name which looks like mine and make up a personality.

could you make a part for me please?


Sure! If you don't want a Navi for a person in this, or not in particular, just post here and I'll see.
Why not...
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A kind of Narcy Hide rip-off, but just a little more 'male', and add the 'fro brotha's Niuuji Nazne and Luoar!

('fro brotha names in double spoiler, I changed them a little, but it's easy to find out who they are)


:lol:


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say, eh...., morph. is there still a small part left for me?

i would love to be in it. i don't care if it's a good guy or a bad guy, a human or a navi.

you can make up a rando name which looks like mine and make up a personality.

could you make a part for me please?


Sure! If you don't want a Navi for a person in this, or not in particular, just post here and I'll see.
Why not...
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A kind of Narcy Hide rip-off, but just a little more 'male', and add the 'fro brotha's Niuuji Nazne and Luoar!

('fro brotha names in double spoiler, I changed them a little, but it's easy to find out who they are)


:lol:


nah, i prefer a normal student with a pretty normal navi at Daylight but has some interesting hobbies at night (don't think too much, you pervs :P

with that i mean hacking or Netcrimes, or going to Interordi :lol:

[Edited on 7-10-2005 by Ray]


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WHAT?! GOING TO INTERORDI IS THE GREATEST OF NET CRIMES!!! :lol:

Well, that's an interesting character.
Which I will be sure to use.
Just wait and see... :devil:


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WHAT?! GOING TO INTERORDI IS THE GREATEST OF NET CRIMES!!! :lol:

Well, that's an interesting character.
Which I will be sure to use.
Just wait and see... :devil:


WHAT that's a Netcrime?!
OMG i'm going to jail, and i wanted to do sooooo much in my life, like training my Nintendog called Rush ;) to win a contest


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Thanks Blazen! Oh, and I'll make an icon for it, if you don't and don't mind. I can only discribe it here, but if possible, I'll post the icon images sometime.


I want to be sure did you see his back story sence you wanted one and what do ya think of it? Also sure go for it use the icon but i want to see it first before it gose in the story,


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NEW EPISODE READY!!! :D

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Battle Network X: The Next Generation – Episode 4: Luna


“Metto-kun, if this was a schoolday, I’d say you really need to buy a clock with an alarm.” Demi said.

They were walking towards Sara’s house, they had agreed to meet her there this morning.

“Why? You do a great job at waking me up every morning!” Metto replied.

“Yes, that’s right, I’m good, now if you were just saving your money for something useful. Like, say, a clock with an alarm.

“Right, but it’s not a schoolday today. You’re not really convincing Demi.”

“I’m not, am I?”

They stood in front of Sara’s house. Metto walked up to the door, and knocked. After a few moments, they heard someone stumbling towards the door, and then it opened.

“Hi Sara.”

“Good morning Metto.” She said, yawning. She was still in her pyjamas. “Why are you here, this early in the morning? It’s Saturday.”

“Uhm… yeah, but I thought you wanted us to come to your place this morning?” Metto replied.

Sara yawned again. “Oh, yeah, right. Sorry Metto, I’m just still a bit—” She yawned. “—sleepy…”

“No! Really?” Metto said sarcastically, stepping through the doorway. Sara closed the door.

“How’s that Navi?” She asked.

“Oh, I’m fine, thank you.” A girly voice said.

“Not you Demi.” Sara replied.

“Aw crap…” Demi grinned. “Well, she’s fine. She has already woken up once, at midnight, very nicely waking me up, but we didn’t have much chance to talk to her yet.”

Something stirred behind Demi. “Kuwaii-kun, are those you’re friends?” Demi’s faced turned red as he turned to the Navi standing behind him.

“I thought I told you not to call me like that.” He said behind his hand.

Hai, Demi-sensei.” She replied with a trace of irony in his voice. Demi was now as red as a tomato. Sara and Metto burst out in laughter.

“Anyway,” Sara said, her eyes full of tears of laughter. “Who are you? Where are you from? What were you doing with those creepy Navis?”

“Wooh… one question at a time, please, dear lady.” The silvery Navi girl said. “I am Luna.EXE and I’m a solo Navi. I can’t remember much from before I woke up in this PET, but I know I’m from some small country, of which I, unfortunately, can’t remember the name of right now. When I was visiting Japan, I was attacked by those Heal Navis, and I don’t know why. All I know is that I feel different from before, and my guess is that they had my Solo Navi Programs extracted from me. And now I have the need for a PET and an Operator.”

“So we need to get you a PET for yourself…” Sara muttered.

“Not that I don’t like it here with Demi.” Luna said. “But I just need an Operator and a PET of my own.

“Well,” Metto said, “there are a lot of people out there who don’t have a Navi yet. But usually a Navi comes with a PET, and we also don’t want to give you to a person we don’t know we can trust.”

They all started thinking. But one of them already had a solution to a lot of answers.

“Wait here!” Sara said. She stood up and ran up the stairs to her room.

“What is she going to do?” Luna asked.

“Go do something about her bad hair?” Metto guessed.

After a while, Metto grew impatient, so he stood up and wanted to go up the stairs as well, when Sara came rushing down the stairs again. Unfortunately for both of them, she tripped a fell down half the stairs right on top of Metto.

“AUCH!” They both cried. Metto rubbed his butt. “Geez, I knew you could be clumsy, but this is just INSANE!”

“Sorry!” Sara replied. “Anyway, this is the problem to all our solutions!” She held up a small round suit-case.

“You mean the solution to all our problems, right?” Metto asked.

“Yes, that’s what I said, didn’t I?” Sara said.

“Whatever…” Metto sighed.

Sara opened the case, revealing a bright yellow PET. “Tadaa!” She cried out of happiness.

“Great!” Metto said. “So we already have a PET. Now we’ll just need a person without a Navi, a person we can trust, a person who can take responsibility…”

Sara looked at him with her pwease-pwease-pwease puppy-eyes.

“Hmm… I wonder were we could find that kind of person…” Metto said thinking hard.

SMACK!

“Auch! Sara! What was that good for?”

“Ahum… maybe you simply forgot, considering the state of your brain, but haven’t you considered me as an option?”



Silence. Deadly silence.

YOU???” Metto finally said. “Whoo, I’m sorry, but I can remember your last Navis clearly enough not to being so trustful with Navis towards you.”

“Then what did I do wrong?” Sara asked.

“Hmm… lessee…”


>>>Flashback, Vira:

A young girl, 9 years old. She had just gotten her first Navi, named Vira.EXE, a blackish brown and reddish pink girl Navi with bright golden yellow eyes.. She held her cream-colored PET in her hands.

“Shall we go cycling, Vira?” She asked her Navi with a voice of innocence.

“Okay!” The Navi replied with joy.

When the girl was cycling, the PET in her hand, she closed her eyes in joy as she rode down the steep hill.

“WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEH!”

She didn’t notice the big tree at the end though. There was a “CRASH!” and the PET’s screen turned dark, cracks running along all over it.

Back to Reality<<<


“Ah, well, yes, but Vira was an exception!” Sara said.

“Oh?” Metto replied. “Remember Kozo?”


>>>Another Flashback, Kozo:

Same girl, 10 years old now. Instead of a creamy pink, she now has a green PET in her hand. In it was a green boy Navi covered with a thin layer of some kind of fur. Green fur…

“What do you want to do Kozo?” The girl asked the Navi. The Navi didn’t hear her, it was busy running around, he was quite hyperactive.

“What do you want to do Kozo?” The girl asked again. The Navi just ignored her.

“Kozo, are you listening?” The girl tried. No response.

The girl got frustrated and threw the PET away. After the screen was cracked, the Navi inside it finally noticed her. “Sara! What are you doing?” He asked, confused.

This time, Sara didn’t listen to him either. She lifted her foot into the air… “Sara?” It sounded scared from the PET. CRASH! CRASH, CRASH! And no sound ever came from the green PET again…

Back to Reality, again<<<


“Well, he didn’t listen to me!” Sara replied. “What would you have done in my place?”

“I’d’ve sold him.” Was the answer.

“Anyway,” Sara said, “After Kozo it never went wrong again.”

“Or did it?” Metto said.


>>>And yet another Flashback: Hella

The girl had moved to a new town. Her father had a new job, and now she lived closer to her friends. She was around the age of 12 now.

“Mum, do you know where my PET is?” She asked her mother.

“No dear, I haven’t seen it anywhere.” Her mother replied.


… … … … …


In the middle of the street lay a small red device. It lay upside-down, and there came a nearly-unhearable voice from out of the device.

“Sara? Are you there? You forgot where you left me again, you silly girl.”

A car came around the corner. The owner of the voice heard it coming near.

“Sara? That you?”

Sounds of a little red device being ridden over. The voice had shut up.

Back at the girl’s house, she had already stopped looking for her PET, and was watching Tv.

Back to Reality, oh God, I hope this was the last flashback in a long time to come…<<<


“Alright, alright… so all of my former Navis’ PETs were destroyed. So what? I’ll be careful this time! I promise!”

“Nuh-uh.” Metto said firm.

Sara looked at Metto with puppy-eyes. “Pweeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaassse???”

For your information, there are few, VERY few people who can resist the puppy-eyes. Especially Sara’s. Metto sweatdropped at the sight. Not even he was immune for it.

“Alright…” He sighed. “Alright, I give up…”

“YAY!” Sara exclaimed. “Oh Metto, you’re such a sweetheart!” She pulled him into a tight embrace and kissed him on the cheek.

“Hey!” Metto cried out, embarrassed. “What did I do to deserve this punishment?” The Navis laughed at the look on his face. Sara, full of joy, laughed too.

She kissed me? Metto thought, touching his cheek. She actually kissed me just there?




Yes, there are indeed VERY few people resistant to puppy-eyes. No! Don’t you look at me like that! I’m immune! I… okay I’m not… I surrender to your will… (you: :cool:!)

Okay, kuwaii means ‘cute’. So when Luna calls Demi Kuwaii-kun she’s either making fun of him, or she really likes him. Sensei means ‘teacher’, and hai means ‘yes’.

The names of Sara’s former Navis are random. Save one, who’s gonna play a big role later in the story.
I based Kozo off Greenman from the anime. You know, the Navi Gutsman had to face in the first round? I combined his design with that of a half cat-half human being, getting a green-furred, hyperactive Navi! ^_^

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That was a sad episode, those poor navis.:cry: Although it was funny.:lol:


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That was a sad episode, those poor navis.:cry: Although it was funny.:lol:


Yes, innocent girls are SO cruel. *stares around suspiciously*

Don't worry, they might, I repeat, MIGHT get a bigger role. Maybe, MAYBE only in Flashbacks, but still...

Oh, and that Sharpy...
Reminds me of Revolver Ocelot Cross Searchman... 0_o


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